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Astraia
Jun 10, 2007 4:13:26 GMT -5
Post by astraia on Jun 10, 2007 4:13:26 GMT -5
Name:Astraia Gender:Mare Age:4 Breed:Mustang Height:16.3hh Color:Dappled Palimino/buckskin Alliance:Horde(dark) Deity:Hades Appearance:(siggy) Personality:This mare can be very gentle but if provoked,can be quite agressive and destuctive as well.
History:Astraia was born and raised in the wild,but when she was only a yearling,her mother,along with the mares in the heard including the stallion,we captured by men.Since she was old enough to take care of herself somewhat,she ventured off to find a new heard away from that place that held so many memories of her past,the good...and bad. Sample Roleplay:[ooc]This sample makes sence if you conbind it with her history just so ya know:)[/ooc]As she came out of her hiding place,Astraia looked to the horizion to see the last glimps of her mother,her heard...and her life.Filled with sorrow and self pitty,she fell to the ground and wept.After weeping for quite some time,she finaly stood up and though her situation through.After evaluating her choices,she decided to leave the place that held so many memories. I cannot stay here any longer,she thought,And with that she reared up to make a goodbye whinney to her homeland and took off in the opposite direction of where she knew her heard was headed.With a heavy heart,she never once looked back.
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Astraia
Jun 10, 2007 6:28:22 GMT -5
Post by SeaLight on Jun 10, 2007 6:28:22 GMT -5
A few spelling errors... heard = herd, and a few other small things. Try to fix that, and you're accepted for the moment.
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